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MELD 1AA3 Advanced Academic Writing (C01)

Academic Year: Winter 2019

Term: Winter

Day/Evening: D

Instructor: Dr. Anna Moro


Office: L.R. Wilson Hall 4041

Phone: 905-525-9140 x

Office Hours: Please consult section instructor

Course Objectives:

Course overview

A writing course that focuses on the development of the appropriate language (grammar, vocabulary, style) and structure for essays and analysing charts/graphs. Includes workshops on documenting sources and citation styles.

Textbooks, Materials & Fees:

  • Norloff, C. & Renehan, A. (2016). University Success Writing Transition Level. Pearson Education.
  • Paterson, K. & Wedge, R. (2014). Oxford Grammar for EAP: English grammar and practice for academic purposes: With answers. OUP.*

*Although the Paterson and Wedge Oxford Grammar is included in the materials for 1AA3, it is a mandatory student resource to be used throughout the MELD program. It is not intended exclusively for this course.

Method of Assessment:

Argumentative Research Paper (28% total)

  1. Annotated Bibliography 4%
  2. Thesis Statement/Outline 4%
  3. Rough Draft 10% (including data commentary)
  4. Final Draft 10%

Homework & Quizzes 10%

Class Participation1 10%

Midterm Exam2 15%

Vocabulary size assessment 2%

Final Exam3 35%



1Students cannot earn participation marks without attending.

2To be held the week of Feb 11 – 15.

3Students must pass the final exam to demonstrate that they have met the appropriate language benchmark. The final exam will be held during the McMaster final examination period (April 11 - 29).

Policy on Missed Work, Extensions, and Late Penalties:

Policy on missed work/late penalties

Course work must be submitted on the due dates, unless permission for an extension has been granted by the instructor before the due date. Extensions may be granted for legitimate reasons (e.g., MSAF, or medical or other documentation submitted to the Faculty of Humanities Advising Office). Late assignments will be penalized by 10% a day (including weekends).

MELD Course attendance policy

Students are expected to attend, be prepared for, and participate in each class. This is critical in order to ensure maximum exposure to academic English, and to meet the learning objectives of the course.

Please Note the Following Policies and Statements:

Academic Integrity

You are expected to exhibit honesty and use ethical behaviour in all aspects of the learning process. Academic credentials you earn are rooted in principles of honesty and academic integrity. It is your responsibility to understand what constitutes academic dishonesty.

Academic dishonesty is to knowingly act or fail to act in a way that results or could result in unearned academic credit or advantage. This behaviour can result in serious consequences, e.g. the grade of zero on an assignment, loss of credit with a notation on the transcript (notation reads: "Grade of F assigned for academic dishonesty"), and/or suspension or expulsion from the university. For information on the various types of academic dishonesty please refer to the Academic Integrity Policy, located at

The following illustrates only three forms of academic dishonesty:

  • plagiarism, e.g. the submission of work that is not one’s own or for which other credit has been obtained.
  • improper collaboration in group work.
  • copying or using unauthorized aids in tests and examinations.

Authenticity / Plagiarism Detection

Some courses may use a web-based service ( to reveal authenticity and ownership of student submitted work. For courses using such software, students will be expected to submit their work electronically either directly to or via Avenue to Learn (A2L) plagiarism detection (a service supported by so it can be checked for academic dishonesty.

Students who do not wish to submit their work through A2L and/or must still submit an electronic and/or hardcopy to the instructor. No penalty will be assigned to a student who does not submit work to or A2L. All submitted work is subject to normal verification that standards of academic integrity have been upheld (e.g., on-line search, other software, etc.). To see the Policy, please go to

Courses with an On-Line Element

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Online Proctoring

Some courses may use online proctoring software for tests and exams. This software may require students to turn on their video camera, present identification, monitor and record their computer activities, and/or lockdown their browser during tests or exams. This software may be required to be installed before the exam begins.

Conduct Expectations

As a McMaster student, you have the right to experience, and the responsibility to demonstrate, respectful and dignified interactions within all of our living, learning and working communities. These expectations are described in the Code of Student Rights & Responsibilities (the "Code"). All students share the responsibility of maintaining a positive environment for the academic and personal growth of all McMaster community members, whether in person or online.

It is essential that students be mindful of their interactions online, as the Code remains in effect in virtual learning environments. The Code applies to any interactions that adversely affect, disrupt, or interfere with reasonable participation in University activities. Student disruptions or behaviours that interfere with university functions on online platforms (e.g. use of Avenue 2 Learn, WebEx or Zoom for delivery), will be taken very seriously and will be investigated. Outcomes may include restriction or removal of the involved students' access to these platforms.

Academic Accommodation of Students with Disabilities

Students with disabilities who require academic accommodation must contact Student Accessibility Services (SAS) at 905-525-9140 ext. 28652 or e-mail to make arrangements with a Program Coordinator. For further information, consult McMaster University’s Academic Accommodation of Students with Disabilities policy.

Email correspondence policy

It is the policy of the Faculty of Humanities that all email communication sent from students to instructors (including TAs), and from students to staff, must originate from each student’s own McMaster University email account. This policy protects confidentiality and confirms the identity of the student.  Instructors will delete emails that do not originate from a McMaster email account.

Modification of course outlines

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Request for Relief for Missed Academic Term Work
McMaster Student Absence Form (MSAF)

In the event of an absence for medical or other reasons, students should review and follow the Academic Regulation in the Undergraduate Calendar "Requests for Relief for Missed Academic Term Work".

Academic Accommodation for Religious, Indigenous and Spiritual Observances (RISO)

Students requiring academic accommodation based on religious, indigenous or spiritual observances should follow the procedures set out in the RISO policy. Students should submit their request to their Faculty Office normally within 10 working days of the beginning of term in which they anticipate a need for accommodation or to the Registrar's Office prior to their examinations. Students should also contact their instructors as soon as possible to make alternative arrangements for classes, assignments, and tests.

Copyright and Recording

Students are advised that lectures, demonstrations, performances, and any other course material provided by an instructor include copyright protected works. The Copyright Act and copyright law protect every original literary, dramatic, musical and artistic work, including lectures by University instructors.

The recording of lectures, tutorials, or other methods of instruction may occur during a course. Recording may be done by either the instructor for the purpose of authorized distribution, or by a student for the purpose of personal study. Students should be aware that their voice and/or image may be recorded by others during the class. Please speak with the instructor if this is a concern for you.

Extreme Circumstances

The University reserves the right to change the dates and deadlines for any or all courses in extreme circumstances (e.g., severe weather, labour disruptions, etc.). Changes will be communicated through regular McMaster communication channels, such as McMaster Daily News, A2L and/or McMaster email.

Topics and Readings:




Skills covered

Major assessments


Jan 7 – 11

Soc 1 (pp. 2-12, 23-24)

Bio 1 (pp. 50-54)

  • Research paper overview; narrowing a topic; developing a research question
  • Verb tenses



Jan 14 – 18


Jan 21 – 25

Econ 1 (pp. 28-38)

Env Eng 1 (pp. 117-119)

Soc 2 (pp. 124-138)

  • Idea development; evaluating sources; organizing research; reasoning for argumentation
  • Review of sentence structures



Jan 28 – Feb 1

Soc 1 (pp. 17-22)

  • Annotated bibliography



Feb 4 – 8

Econ 2 (pp. 44-47)

Bio 1 (pp. 62-67)

Soc 1 (pp. 12-16)

  • Thesis statements; outlines; paper organizational structures
  • Reporting verbs

Annotated bibliography


Feb 11 – 15




Feb 18 – 22



Feb 25 – Mar 1

Econ 1 (pp. 39-43)

Econ 2 (pp. 162-164)

Soc 2 (pp. 139-142)

  • Integrating sources
  • Signposting language, direct quotations, paraphrasing

Thesis statement & outline


Mar 4 – 8



Mar 11 – 15

Env Eng 1 (pp. 100-116)

  • Visuals; data commentary



Mar 18 – 22

Bio 1 (pp. 55-61, 68-71)

Hum 1 (pp. 74-99)

  • Coherence & cohesion; revision & editing; style & voice
  • Adverbials, language for cohesion
  • Scheduled instructor consultations (during office hours)

Rough draft – including data commentary

Due: March 18 at 9am in ALL sections


Mar 25 – 29



Apr 1 – 5



Apr 8– 9


  • Review

Final draft


Apr 11-29


Other Course Information:

Use of Turnitin

In this course we will be using a web-based service ( to reveal plagiarism. Students will be expected to submit their work electronically to and in hard copy so that it can be checked for academic dishonesty. Students who do not wish to submit their work to must still submit a copy to the instructor. No penalty will be assigned to a student who does not submit work to All submitted work is subject to normal verification that standards of academic integrity have been upheld (e.g., on-line search, etc.).